Barbara, ESSAY FEEDBACK: Thesis STATEMENTS are usually one sentence. Try to use direct quotes for definitions or facts; otherwise, you should paraphrase. Avoid the use of contractions in a formal essay. Some ideas are repeated which reduces the effectiveness of the message.
Barbara,
ReplyDeleteESSAY FEEDBACK:
Thesis STATEMENTS are usually one sentence.
Try to use direct quotes for definitions or facts; otherwise, you should paraphrase.
Avoid the use of contractions in a formal essay.
Some ideas are repeated which reduces the effectiveness of the message.